Thursday, January 24, 2013

Similes & Metaphors!!!

A simile is a comparison using like or as. A metaphor is a comparison without using like or as. Similes and Metaphors are an important part of writing because they help describe things and they help create a visual in the reader or listener's mind. Similes and Metaphors both spice up the writing and help with getting the point across.


Examples of Similes:

Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond

Find light in the beautiful sea
I choose to be happy
You and I, you and I
We’re like diamonds in the skyYou’re a shooting star I see
A vision of ecstasy
When you hold me, I’m alive
We’re like diamonds in the skyI knew that we’d become one right away
Oh, right away
At first sight I felt the energy of sun rays
I saw the life inside your eyes

So shine bright, tonight you and I
We’re beautiful like diamonds in the skyEye to eye, so alive
We’re beautiful like diamonds in the sky
Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond
Shining bright like a diamond
We’re beautiful like diamonds in the sky

Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond
Shining bright like a diamond
We’re beautiful like diamonds in the sky
Palms rise to the universe
As we moonshine and molly
Feel the warmth, we’ll never die
We’re like diamonds in the sky
You’re a shooting star I see
A vision of ecstasy
When you hold me, I’m alive
We’re like diamonds in the sky
At first sight I felt the energy of sun rays
I saw the life inside your eyes

So shine bright, tonight you and I
We’re beautiful like diamonds in the skyEye to eye, so alive
We’re beautiful like diamonds in the sky
Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond
Shining bright like a diamond
We’re beautiful like diamonds in the sky

Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond
Shining bright like a diamond
We’re beautiful like diamonds in the sky
Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond
So shine bright, tonight you and I
We’re beautiful like diamonds in the skyEye to eye, so alive
We’re beautiful like diamonds in the sky
Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond
Shine bright like a diamond


Examples of Metaphors:

Shawty, I'ma only tell you this once, you the illest
And for your lovin' I'ma Die Hard like Bruce Willis
You got spark, you, you got spunk
You, you got something all the girls want
You're like a candy store and I'm a toddlerYou got me wantin' more and ma-ma-more of

Your love, your love, your love, your love
Your love, your love, your love, your love
Your love, your love, your love, your love
Your love, your love, your love, your love

Yo, he the type to pop tags and be cockin' the brim
Might breeze through The Ave, might stop at the gym
And he keep a do rag, keep his wave on swim
Wa-waves on swim so they hate on him

Anyway I think I met him sometime before
In a different life or where I record
I mean he was Adam, I think I was EveBut my vision ends with the apple on the tree

S on my chest 'cause I'm ready to save him
'Cause I'm the one like I'm Tracy McGrady
And I think I love him like Eminem is calling Shady
When he call me mama, lil' mama, I call him baby

Shawty, I'ma only tell you this once, you the illest
And for your lovin' I'ma Die Hard like Bruce Willis
You got spark, you, you got spunk
You, you got something all the girls want
You're like a candy store and I'm a toddler
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You got me wantin' more and ma-ma-more of

Your love, your love, your love, your love
Your love, your love, your love, your love
Your love, your love, your love, your love
Your love, your love, your love, your love

He the type to keep a couple hundred grand in a rubber band
Just left Money Gram in the Lemon Lam
Hot damn, make me scream like summer jam
I mean that nigga must be from the motherland

Anyway, I think I met him in the sky
When I was a geisha, he was a samuraiSomehow I understood him when he spoke Thai
Never spoke lies and he never broke fly

S on my chest, let me get my cape on
With a certificate that I change my name on
N-n-n-name on
With a certificate that I change my name on

Shawty, I'ma only tell you this once, you the illest
And for your lovin' I'ma Die Hard like Bruce Willis
You got spark, you, you got spunk
You, you got something all the girls want
You're like a candy store and I'm a toddlor
You got me wantin' more and ma-ma-more of

Your love, your love, your love, your love
Your love, your love, your love, your love
Your love, your love, your love, your love
Your love, your love, your love, your love

Find me in the dark
I'll be in the stars
Find me in your heart
I'm in need of your love

Monday, January 21, 2013

Martin Luther king's dream

Millions of people lived by Dr. Martin Luther King's dream to the best of their abilities but have still fallen short of what was expected. King stated on the night before his assassination,"but I want you to know that tonight, that we, as a people, will get to the promise land." Dr.king knew that deep down and at some point in life we would achieve racial equality. If Dr. King walked into my classroom today he would be proud of somethings but disappointed at others.

Dr. Martin Luther king would be extremely over joyed that we are now being treated with respect, and as equals. When he walked into our classroom he would notice that we had a Caucasian teacher who we could have an open conversation with even though some of us were Latino and African American. King would be overwhelmed by how we act as if we were never unequal and how we work so well together.

Dr. King's excitement and joy would quickly wear off when he realized how we still have problems accepting one another. He would be disappointed in the way we treat one another and how we disrespect our elders and our own family members. Dr.King wouldn't understand how we could call ourselves equal but still judge each other and hurt each other as if we weren't.

Dr.King would be so moved by how much he has changed our country and by how so many people followed in his footsteps. He would probably continue to try to make a change and stop violence and other problems that we face today. Such as becoming equal overall not just equal by race but in gender, age, occupations, ect. Dr. King's dream of equality would be just the beginning of what he felt needed to be accomplished.



Monday, January 7, 2013

Hyperbole!

A hyperbole is something that is overly exaggerated. Like if i were to say i felt like i was bleeding to death. literally i was not bleeding to death but you would see a perfect picture of how much blood there was and how it felt. Using hyperbole's makes writing interesting and keeps the reader engaged. Without hyperbole's writing would be boring, dull, and too serious.

Beyonce's Dangerously in love

I love you, I love you, I love you

Baby, I love you; you are my life
My happiest moments weren't complete if you weren't by my side
You're my relation in connection to the sun
With you next to me there's no darkness I can't overcome
You are my raindrops, I am the seed
With you and God who's the sunlight I bloom and grow so beautifully
Baby, I'm so proud, proud to be your girl
You make the confusion go all away from this cold and mixed-up world

[Chorus]
I am in love with you
You set me free
I can't do this thing called life without you here with me
'Cause I'm dangerously in love with you
I'll never leave
Just keep lovin' me the way I love you loving me
'Cause I am in love with you
You set me free
I can't do this thing called life without you here with me
'Cause I'm dangerously in love with you
I'll never leave
Just keep lovin' me the way I love you loving me

And I know you love me, love me for who I am
'Cause years before I became who I am, baby, you were my man
I know it ain't easy, easy loving me
I appreciate the love and dedication from you to me
Later on in my destiny I see myself having your child
I see myself being your wife and I see my whole future in your eyes
Thought of all my love for you sometimes make me want to cry
Realize all my blessings; I'm grateful to have you by my side


I am in love with you
You set me free 

I can't do this thing called life without you here with me
'Cause I'm dangerously in love with you
I'll never leave
Just keep lovin' me the way I love you loving me
'Cause I am in love with you
You set me free 
I can't do this thing called life without you here with me
'Cause I'm dangerously in love with you
I'll never leave
Just keep lovin' me the way I love you loving me


Every time I see your face my heart smiles
Every time it feels so good it hurts sometimes
Created in this world to love, to hold, to feel, to breathe, to love you

Dangerously in love


I am in love with you
You set me free 
I can't do this thing called life without you here with me
'Cause I'm dangerously in love with you
I'll never leave
Just keep lovin' me the way I love you loving me
'Cause I am in love with you
You set me free
I can't do this thing called life without you here with me
'Cause I'm dangerously in love with you
I'll never leave
Just keep lovin' me the way I love you loving me